*Editing Services*

I’ve joined the crew at COOKIE LYNN PUB SERVICES as a copy editor!  – Check us out HERE



To schedule a read, please email me at jolenebperry (at) gmail (dot) com – with EDIT in the subject line. If you’d like a type of edit I don’t list below, please let me know – chances are pretty good that I’d be happy to help.


A free read of chapter one (no more than 4k) – at this point, we can both decide if I’m a good fit for your story. I’ll happily pass on about a few paragraphs of notes without charge. If I don’t think I can help you with the manuscript, I’ll let you know. If I feel that there are changes to be made before I can help you, I’ll let you know that as well.


This edit is my recommendation if  – ONE – you have a first draft and you want some general idea of what’s working and what’s not, or – TWO – if you’ve been querying and your book just isn’t getting the attention it deserves.

I’ll do a quick read of your MS and send you a 1-2 page edit letter outlining strengths, weaknesses, plot pitfalls, and a few notes on characterization as well as marketability, which is key if you’re going the traditional publishing route, and distinctly important if you’re going indie.

Cost: 125.00  for a 50 – 90K novel. Email me for a quote if your word count doesn’t fall within this scope.



I’ll cover what I do in the SIMPLE STORY EDIT, but your edit letter will be about 5-10 pages long – similar to what you’d get from an acquisitions editor after your novel sells. I’ll make a few after chapter notes, and a section of line notes as well – especially if one area showcases an issue and/or a strength seen throughout your manuscript. This does not take the place of a line edit. Those are crucial.

COST: 50.00 per 10K read after the free (no more than 4K) first chapter. If your completed work is less than 10K words, and you’re looking for an edit on the entire project, please email for a quote.



Please see Cookie Lynn Pub!



  1. If you only want me to read PART of your MS? I’m totally fine with that.
  2. I don’t need payment before I start working on your MS, but I do request payment before I send over your notes.
  3. Different editors will have different opinions on how to best showcase any given story. But in the end, your story is your story. Please take what you learn from any editor and make it your own.
  4. If you have a different kind of edit in mind – query, synopsis, etc… I’ll happily give you a quote depending on what you’re after.



  1. I’m not just helping you put together a solid story, but a story that has the best chance of selling.
  2. My obsessive watching of Publisher’s Marketplace, outlining recent sales.
  3. Over a year of interning with Jenny Bent of the Bent Agency.
  4. Published projects with five different publishing houses. This means I’ve worked with 5 different acquisitions editors, line editors, and copy editors.
  5. Seven years working as a traditionally published and indie author.
  6. Years of working as mentors for numerous writing conferences, including numerous drafting, editing, and query workshops.
  7. A willingness to discuss my notes with the author when I’m finished with their project.

To schedule an edit, please email me at jolenebperry (at) gmail (dot) com – with EDIT in the subject line. To schedule a copy edit, please contact COOKIE LYNN.

Or, if you’d rather fill out a form, you can find that HERE.

Happy Writing!

~ Jo